Return-path: Received: from DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU by DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU (PMDF V5.0-5 #7763) id <01HZUACV1EK090MYED@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU> for sw-rpg@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU; Wed, 10 Jan 1996 09:50:08 -0400 (EDT) Received: from VAX1.Mankato.MSUS.EDU (VAX1.Mankato.MSUS.EDU) by DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU (PMDF V5.0-5 #7763) id <01HZUADQQ78Q91W3ZA@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU> for JAE+sw-rpg@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU; Wed, 10 Jan 1996 09:50:34 -0400 (EDT) Received: from Dialin-003.Mankato.MSUS.EDU by VAX1.MANKATO.MSUS.EDU (PMDF V4.3-7 #3750) id <01HZU8A3TMDS006J34@VAX1.MANKATO.MSUS.EDU>; Wed, 10 Jan 1996 08:50:25 -0600 (CST) Date: Wed, 10 Jan 1996 08:50:25 -0600 (CST) Date-warning: Date header was inserted by VAX1.MANKATO.MSUS.EDU From: blue@VAX1.MANKATO.MSUS.EDU (Ryan Olson) Subject: X-Sender: blue@vax1.mankato.msus.edu To: JAE+sw-rpg@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU Errors-to: jae+sw-rpg-errors@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU Reply-to: jae+sw-rpg@DRYCAS.CLUB.CC.CMU.EDU Message-id: <01HZU8A4RWYA006J34@VAX1.MANKATO.MSUS.EDU> MIME-version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Windows Eudora Version 1.4.4 Content-type: MULTIPART/MIXED; BOUNDARY="Boundary (ID nQWu6pv2wCfOfLW5vvW6Ew)" X-attachments: C:\MSWORKS\STARWARS.TXT; --Boundary (ID nQWu6pv2wCfOfLW5vvW6Ew) Content-type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii This is a story I am starting. I want to get criticisms and praise :). The More to come part at the bottom is optional at this point :). I am not sure if it will be attached to this letter or not...it's my first try at attaching something. Also you may need to word wrap it in your viewer...mine all needed it done (I wrote it in Microsoft Works). Ryan Olson Blue@vax1.mankato.msus.edu --Boundary (ID nQWu6pv2wCfOfLW5vvW6Ew) Content-type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-disposition: attachment; filename="STARWARS.TXT" Introduction "10 minutes, hurry it up" Jonny concentrated harder on the keypad in front of him...typing furiously. We had ten minutes left before security would figure out something was up. Jonny is the best slicer in the Alliance, maybe in the whole galaxy, but sometimes he cuts it a bit too close to our deadline. "Come on Jonny, we gotta give ourselves some time to get out...Creed won't wait much past 1:20. It's now or never..." "Just a little bit more...GOT IT." He yelled a little to loudly. "Shhhhhh...Ok ok...copy it and let's get out of here." "Okay, done. Lead the way buddy." Now I get to do what I'm best at, hiding and escaping quietly. Ya see getting into an Imperial bunker is easy, nobody in their right mind should want to. Getting out is a little more difficult, made just a tad easier by the fact that ya broke in the first place, at least ya know the best way in, and hopefully, out. I hurry around the corner and almost bump into an Imperial Captain. Luckily we were prepared for something like this to happen, or else he might have had a chance to react. I immediately kick him in the gut with my foot, and when he keels over, I give him a knee to the head. He falls hard to the floor, obviously unconscious. Jonny can't stand any Imperials, unconscious or not, so he slits the Captain's neck and takes his insignia, to add to his collection. Jonny scares me sometimes, he enjoys this part a little too much, but I guess killing him now might save us the trouble of him waking and sounding an alarm later. Left. Right. Second door on left. I have the floor plans memorized, I know exactly where I am going, and where the optional routes are in case we run into trouble. We get lucky, we don't hit any trouble on the way to the rendezvous point. There we meet the rest of the team: Creed, our human leader, Krybena, our wookie muscle, Jaarmand, the Duros pilot, Kumatchuck, the Talz demolitions expert, Cramnder, our Corellian security disabler, Jonny our slicer, and me, Jeberron. We are Cracken's elite commando unit. Along with a few others we use for different type missions. We rush onto the awaiting ship, which Jaarmand never shut down, so we make a quick getaway, using our "stealth" ship, which we use on the less secure and less advances Imperial garrisons. They have such primitive scanners, we don't need to sneak down planet and hide for days or sometimes weeks, we just fly away. Sometimes they are alerted to our presence, either by my mistake, someone else's mistake, or bad luck. Then we get a chase. This time no chase. Oh and by the way, I never screw up. I seem to have a gift of having things go my way when things seem at their worst. I guess I'm just lucky. Don't get me wrong, not every mission is as smooth as this one, but we usually have the same ending to all of them, we get home alive, often bruised, but alive and ninety percent of the time, successful. Like I said...not all our missions go so smoothly. I remember a time when we were trying to break a certain Alliance delegate out of the Kessel Spice Mines.... More To Come --Boundary (ID nQWu6pv2wCfOfLW5vvW6Ew)--